Lisnpuppy
Aug 18 2008, 09:12 PM
I close my eyes to dream
and feel the heat of my desire.
I reach, caress your skin, your lips
your touch to take me higher.
I long to hear your voice again
if only in my sleep.
I wish to stop the endless cold
that covers me so deep.
I dream of how your soft lips taste
I long only for your touch.
To once again hear whispered words
that once meant oh so much.
I can only wish the darkness ends
for me to see your face.
To lay my head and hear your heart
The pieces back in place.
dezdimona
Aug 18 2008, 09:35 PM
very nice, very nice indeed!
nosisab
Aug 18 2008, 09:47 PM
As aways I love your poems, my dear child. They ever sounds so sincere.
etholas
Aug 21 2008, 04:21 PM
Beautiful poem Lisnpuppy. Touching.
Lisnpuppy
Aug 21 2008, 04:39 PM
Thank you to everyone with you kind words. I appreciate it.
Chesto
Sep 8 2008, 08:09 AM
A happy ending would only spoil it. What price, art?
Blacksnake89
Sep 8 2008, 09:50 AM
Very well written Lis, it is a beautifully well composed work worthy of gracing one of the several poetry books I've read. My hat...err beanie is off to you.
Lisnpuppy
Sep 9 2008, 04:22 AM
Thank you Blacksnake. Very sweet of you.
And that goodness that life does not always imitate art..
Chesto
Sep 9 2008, 07:55 AM
Amen.
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