back in early 2006 i was asked bya friend to rewrite her orginal work so long
this is the result entiteld so long ,goodbye
...wel she liked it anyway

i cant help but think of you
the way you laughed
when you made me smile
the little things you did
the only things that never end
are my memories of you in my head

im all alone
its been so long
the look on you face
wil never escape my mind
as i lie alone in bed
so long
good bye

the last time we talked
you looked at me
and a smile crossed your face
and i see what i saw then when i close my eyes
i though it would be forever
so long
good bye

but here i am
all alone
and its been so long
the tears are trying to find their freedom
but i wil hold it inside
biting them away always
dont went anybody to see me cry
so long
good bye

at night every day
i pray and pray
to see you again
some faithfull day
when my pain has gone
i know you want me to go on
but its hard to say strong i know
so long
good bye

and here i am
all alone
and its been so long
something is wrong
when i look in your eyes
in the photo i have
tainted memories of what once was
i know you wil say
i am fine
so long
good bye

been sitting here for so long
thoughts of joining you enterd my mind
and i scream
and cry
in my mind
but nothing wil fix
what you did
and i said
i said

so long

but not good bye
not goodbye
i know you want me
to live my life
and you are watching me from
you home up above
but i cant help but say
i want to be with you and stay
so long
good bye

and its been so long
and i am trying so hard
to carry on
to be strong
and say not one word
but i know your watching
and waiting over me
protecting me from things i cannot see
i see you every time
i close my eyes
and before i open them again
and my soul begins to wake
you look at me and smile
and say
so long

good bye

lovely

bit slow on the uptake on my side but better late then never right ?
thanks

damned doublepost

Beautiful

It's very good.

From the poems meaning, It's sounds like your friend lost someone she was very close to.

- Raz