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KottonKing
The power of a tear
Is hugging a long lost love
Being far away, yet feeling so near
Watching her dance like the skies boastful dove

The power of a tear
Is know hope is a good thing
Hoping life isn't full of fear
Praying that love is an endless thing

The power of a tear
Is happiness when touched deeply
Feeling freedom at the edge of the worlds pier
Sadness when treated so cheaply

The power of a tear
Is the wordless feeling that needs no explanation
dezdimona
nice!
Maharg67
Impressive and deep

Genuine

Like it very much!
Netwit2008
Indeed tears are often underrated, yet they are healing and cleansing to the soul. Good capture of their essence here!
Omeletter
Good poem, i liked it! Keep up the good work here!
Lord Tenaim
the tear and life,
they are intwinned,
without one,
what is the other.

Beautiful and shows the deep understanding of the tear wish to see more of your work. thumbsup.gif
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