KottonKing
Apr 23 2009, 09:43 PM
The power of a tear
Is hugging a long lost love
Being far away, yet feeling so near
Watching her dance like the skies boastful dove
The power of a tear
Is know hope is a good thing
Hoping life isn't full of fear
Praying that love is an endless thing
The power of a tear
Is happiness when touched deeply
Feeling freedom at the edge of the worlds pier
Sadness when treated so cheaply
The power of a tear
Is the wordless feeling that needs no explanation
dezdimona
Apr 24 2009, 06:19 PM
nice!
Maharg67
Jul 5 2009, 09:48 AM
Impressive and deep
Genuine
Like it very much!
Netwit2008
Jul 14 2009, 12:52 PM
Indeed tears are often underrated, yet they are healing and cleansing to the soul. Good capture of their essence here!
Omeletter
Aug 19 2009, 01:25 PM
Good poem, i liked it! Keep up the good work here!
Lord Tenaim
Aug 20 2009, 10:03 PM
the tear and life,
they are intwinned,
without one,
what is the other.
Beautiful and shows the deep understanding of the tear wish to see more of your work.
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