eviljim
Sep 17 2004, 04:41 PM
your kiss, your touch
i crave so much
your lips, so soft
it's all too much
my palms, they sweat
can't touch you yet
you're all i need
but cannot get
i lay awake
not real but fake
my dreams of you
i cannot shake
one day i pray
i'll have a way
to swoon you so
wisk you away
till that day comes
i'll bite my tongue
you'll never know
that you're the one...
tyjet3
Sep 17 2004, 04:54 PM
that's not bad! I'm just not a fan of rhyming.
eviljim
Sep 17 2004, 06:22 PM
my g/f likes me to write stuff for her and i do some stuff elsewise. for some reason it always rhymes though

.
i just can't bring myself to write the one she wants now...
subject: pancakes and maple syrup